miércoles, 15 de octubre de 2008

The Art of Persuation

Moses, another story most of us have heard many times through our lives. These stories from the beginning of the Bible have become part of our culture since we are little and everyone, at least the Catholics know them pretty well. Event though, it is very different to read it form the King James Bible than to hear it as a story or even in a kids book. Moses is the perfect example for the Bible. This man who God makes contact with and does everything that God tells him to, and of course everything will turn out for him.

What this writings of the Bible say is to believe in God. They describe as everyone who trusted in God and believed in him, got practically what they wanted. When the characters such as Abraham, or Moses did what God told them, they always did the right thing and God in a way he prized them. Of course people who read this will want to believe in this God Almighty since he can do everything and if you are loyal he would talk to you and make things work out for you. So I would say that if the Bible was actually trying to make people to believe in it, it makes a pretty good job.

1 comentario:

J. Tangen dijo...

Your writing is improving, but I am seeing a pattern: two paragraphs. I'd like you to be a bit more spontaneous with your writing. See Mariana's for this.


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Avoid the use of "so." Envent though= even though